Watanabe You - Love Live! Sunshine!! v2

so guys, feel free to criticize this art and i wanna hear what you can say especially about my linework and coloring, tbh i think something is not right and i dont know how to improve it.. like i feel like i made her face too bright..

and yeah, this was my first art colored in PS, i immediately forgot how to use SAI poor me

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This is the edited version. I follow some of your suggestions guys and i think this looks much better than the old so thank you!
Link to the old version -> i.imgur.com/eyOdBRe.jpg